Painted Picture

Painted Picture

A Poem by Jennie C.
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Sometimes its easier to write what I would want to have written about me.

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Her body, a canvas
The curves of her hips,
waited to be explored.
Fingertips like bristle,
staining her skin,
painting a story
Mapping an existence.

A kalidascope of color,
melting like crayons
in the summer's sun.
Her smile creates
animation, in a
still frame picture.

She looks at me
with crystallic eyes
Her innocence consumed in a
silky maze of iridescences.


She was to be the prettiest
picture I'd ever painted.

© 2009 Jennie C.


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=D i loved this! total going into my thing! you used amazing words and disribtion =] well done =D

Posted 14 Years Ago


I loved this.. your pictures created by way of words are an outstanding achievement..

Posted 14 Years Ago


Great description, and use of words. It paints the picture for me.

Posted 14 Years Ago


The poem is beautiful. Description and every line was strong. You are excellent Poet. Thank you for sharing.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Jennie C.
Jennie C.

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