I'm not right

I'm not right

A Poem by Jullian Day

Angst filled love poem

I'm not right.  I'm un-well.
Betraying my perfect shell.
Hands shake and swell.

My conscience tucked into bed with
a good Knight's kiss.

Mirror in your eye,
Twin aches in my chest and between
my thighs.
High on the drugs of my mind.

I'm everything I hate.
I'm everything I love.

You are the catalyst to my dark.

Loathsome and curious with me,
with you.

Knight falls upon me.
Consumes my presence.
Living in a world of excitement and 


Out of reach.

There is no enough of you.
My forbidden.

© 2015 Jullian Day

Author's Note

Jullian Day
Open to all thoughts.

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Very well written and thought out. I could feel the emotion that you very trying to convey, passionate and frustrated all at the same time. Extraordinary writing. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 5 Years Ago

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Jullian Day

5 Years Ago

Thank you so very much!

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Added on February 16, 2015
Last Updated on February 16, 2015
Tags: love, affair, cheating, ache, poem, longing


Jullian Day
Jullian Day

Los Angeles, CA