Crash

Crash

A Poem by Joel A Doetsch
"

Didn't feel like making sense.

"
Insanity ended with a shatter
as I laid waste 
to
boring unpredictability

© 2012 Joel A Doetsch


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Joel A Doetsch
Originally Written: January 16, 2012

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Pax
profound and powerful words in short manner,... Insanity brings twist to unpredictability...sometimes..i maybe im wrong...
Great write

Posted 11 Years Ago


A dance inside the mind where thoughts and emotions rarely make the logical sense we might hope... We are constantly crashing. Powerful.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Ees
I feel like this makes sense. What doesn't make sense about this? Okay so it isn''t literally understandable. But what I got out of it (besides a cool sounding collection of words on the screen) is that acting crazy put an end to a period of time that felt boring, though you had been attempting to act crazy for a while, you needed to step up the game... but maybe that was a bad idea....

at least that is what I got out of it. I understand this, because at this point in my life I have become so utterly predictable that nobody is startled when I lick my own left n****e in a grocery store or insist on drinking from a beer bottle held between my breasts at the bar, or you know, skipping around and blowing bubbles... none of it shocks anymore/

Posted 11 Years Ago



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