Beauty Inside

"Finding the good no matter how trying the circumstance"

The question is can you find the beauty in it?
Can you look deep enough to find where it is hiding?
Will you know it when you see it?
It is not always in the shape or form that you envisioned.
You must relax your mind, and follow your heart,
For it is your heart that will guide you there.
Once you find it, are you ready to accept it?
This you cannot know until the moment comes.
The key is to recognize the moment
It is only then that you can welcome the beauty into your heart

Author's Note

any input, or comments would be greatly appreciated

Reviews

[Dipanjan Dutta]

The first line should end with a ?

"You must relax..." this line ends with a " but I don't see the opening " anywhere

The last but one line could be ended with a ;

And the last with a .

These are what you asked for. And then what you didn't ask but even then I will say,

This is a fantastic piece Jeffery. The lyricism of this stanza is refreshing.

[maria ( rose)]

gorgeous work.
The soul has a lot of beauty and a heart has a lot of love-maria
keep it up!

[priya]

As Dipanjan says, its refreshing..people are often scared of new things, change, experimenting and it is in these things that beauty lies.. :)..my review is not exactly related to your poem, i hope it matches somewhat ;) :)

[Jeffrey David]

It relates wonderfully...Thanks You