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An Old Man's Musings

An Old Man's Musings

A Poem by JE Falcon
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A poem of an old person reflecting on their state of being, while at the ocean's side.

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A sunset sea

a windblown tree

and a place to lay my head

the night has come

and I am one

with God

the world is shed.


The stars above

display God's love

And the ocean soothes my soul.

I love this place

this gift of space

yet

to God I’d rather go.


The wind plays tunes

as lullabies

among the branches of this tree

and I feel a yielding

selfless state

flowing over me.


I’ve grown to trust

that the Spirit is here

and I've tried to plant some seeds to sow

but this body is spent

twisted and bent.

So

to God I’d rather go.




JE Falcon

1985

© 2021 JE Falcon


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Very nicely rhymed piece here. However, I'm 76, I can still put my palms on the floor without bending my knees, and I ain't ready to check out yet.

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JE Falcon

1 Month Ago

Thanks for the feedback, happy you liked it. --- And good for you on the bending. But who helps you .. read more
Very well done A true fan of Rhyme and meter Bravo

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JE Falcon

1 Month Ago

Thanks, it's one of my older poems, and thank you for the response.

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I began writing poems and narrative poems as a hobby about 1970. I like writing in rhyme but have others. I published some poems and won some awards in the 1980's, mostly in quarterlies across the U.. more..

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