Tanka

I wrote a Haiku.

Someone said, “This is Senryu!”

I added two lines

explaining my frustration.

Then I titled it, “Tanka”.

JE Falcon

04-07-2022

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

And to think, for all these years that was what I thought New Yorkers called a ship that carries oil.

[JE Falcon]

It was. ... LOL --- If you don't believe it just Google "tanka" and see what you get. :) --- Thanks, John, for the visit.

[Chris Shaw]

You are so clever with this little piece of brevity and it gave me a smile too Falcon.

Chris

[JE Falcon]

Smiles are good! --- And being witty is what I like to do but seldom accomplish. --- Thanks for the visit.

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Clever, Clever, Clever.

j.

[JE Falcon]

Thank You, Jacob, but I do try to minimize vanity; I have been led to understand that it does not do well in the wind. :)

[Cherrie Palmer]

Lol true -so true-
What great fun.

[JE Falcon]

It was! And thanks, Cherrie.