Cues of Love

Cues of Love

A Poem by J. F. Charleston

You hoped we'd still be friends

I noticed a special thing about you

and gave you another chance

we sometimes talk with no ends


A favor you asked

your wish is my pleasure

anything from your measure

isn't anything but a treasure


My heart is a guitar

tuning its love

for your song

to travel beautifully and far


Would you take me away from this

a lifestyle that fast-forwards your life

where people have to carry a knife

to protect you, is a mission

to love you, is a passion


My life was empty

a hole not only in my spirit

but my heart

once lost and split


Yearning to show you

how I feel

what my love for you truely is

not a greasy, banana peel

may  not be bright and shiny

but it's the strongest gem

that yearns to be polished with your love


I think of you always

what you might be wearing

how you've been over the days

if you wonder if I'm caring

all about you


Hopes and dreams I have

they're evolving around you

are you starting to feel the same way I do

could we both be waiting on cues of love?

© 2012 J. F. Charleston

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J. F. Charleston
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"Your wish is my pleasure"........ if anything, this one line alone embodies the true meaning of love between two hearts. Nicely written....

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J. F. Charleston

7 Years Ago

I agree and thanks
Lovely piece my friend, as always.

Posted 7 Years Ago

A sweet, loving piece. Your words flow wonderfully, only adding to the poem's brilliance. Nice!

Posted 8 Years Ago

breath taking, great job.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Wow, I cant say how amazing and beautiful this poem is, my eyes widen in awe and my mind went blank when I read your wonderful poetry ^_^
Great work!
Thanks for sharing!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Those cues of love sometime need to be create. I like the story and the questions in the poem. Love is luck, timing and being in the right place. Thoughts to ponder in the excellent poetry.

Posted 8 Years Ago

My heart is a guitar
tuning its love
for your song...
The whole poem is very nice but these lines are awesome...
Thank you dear cowboy for sharing and posting...

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J. F. Charleston

8 Years Ago

No problem. and thanks for the review.
Sami Khalil

8 Years Ago

You are quite welcome....

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Added on September 14, 2012
Last Updated on September 14, 2012


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