under my son's bed   A Senryu

under my son's bed A Senryu

A Poem by Joyce S. Greene
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you never know what you might find under your son's bed . . .

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© 2013 Joyce S. Greene


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Joyce S. Greene
Publication credit: Prune Juice 2010

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Lol those naughty boys. This made me smile and laugh. Great write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Joyce S. Greene

10 Years Ago

Thanks for leaving such a nice comment. Children are a blessing and I guess a centerfold wasn't the.. read more
Poetic Beauty

10 Years Ago

yes there are much worse things that could have been under that bed.
Haha, this made me smile and giggle Joyce! Ahh youth, what a time(not that centrefolds were ever my thing )
Enjoyed this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Joyce S. Greene

10 Years Ago

Sorry it's taken so long to get back to you, but I got up a little later than usual this morning and.. read more
Ah - the stuff of adolescence... A wink on the page, this - well done, Joyce!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Joyce S. Greene

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Rita. Wordman just asked about the uneaten food I found, and luckily there wasn't any. (I .. read more
So now, Joyce, we exchange smiles and giggles, and there's no better introduction. Love the core of this,it's certainly forewarning a would be mother! What a logic you have tucked inside those laughs, great words, great meter too!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Joyce S. Greene

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Emma. It's nice to meet you. I enjoyed the write of yours i read today and am looking f.. read more
well at least there was no un eaten food or wrappers hope he had good taste with the centerfold
and home work blah

Posted 10 Years Ago


Joyce S. Greene

10 Years Ago

What is good taste with a centerfold, Ron? lol Guess men have never seen one they didn't like, but.. read more
 wordman

10 Years Ago

joyce I wouldn't be concerned its just part of life we all go through as a child and that's where it.. read more
Joyce S. Greene

10 Years Ago

I'm laughing too, Ron. I'll pitch in to help. You're a very good friend of mine!
Ha! I don't go poking under my son's bed anymore. Once burned and all that, you know. Angi~

Posted 10 Years Ago


Joyce S. Greene

10 Years Ago

Probably very wise on your part, though you don't want to leave yourself open for an even bigger sur.. read more
Don't go looking where demon's and devil-advocates hide. Nice write.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Joyce S. Greene

10 Years Ago

Don't know which would be a worse find, Pryde. Thanks for leaving another of your very apropos comme.. read more
I remember those days. Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Joyce S. Greene

10 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by to leave your nice thoughts behind. I really appreciate it.
Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)

10 Years Ago

It was my pleasure.
I remember this from our other poetry site. I loved it because I can relate so well. What to be upset about? The unfinished homework or the centerfold? Having sons is quite the experience! Well written, Joyce. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


Joyce S. Greene

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Lydi. It is but one you never forget. Do you wish yours was still young enough so you coul.. read more
Lydia Shutter

10 Years Ago

NO NO 1000 times NO! :)
Joyce S. Greene

10 Years Ago

You have me grinning now, I thought for sure you'd love to have another guy around to clean up afte.. read more
Very funny and cute! :D Sounds like a typical boy haha.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Joyce S. Greene

10 Years Ago

Thank you for leaving behind such a nice comment, Kelly. Yes, he was a typical boy many years ago a.. read more

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Added on September 8, 2013
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Tags: #poetry, #mothers, #sons, #bed, #homework, #centerfold

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