his soul lies waiting . . .

a love poem for poets and music lovers

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Real music is poetry. To listen to a Leonard Cohen song can take you to good places and beautiful words. Thank you for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Joyce S. Greene]

Thank you so much, Coyote. You have made my evening a very bright one. I would like to be your friend and will put in a request. I will enjoy reading your poetry very much.

[PANTHER811]

With tempo and orchestration your words become the melody of this write. The pen reveals the beauty of the soul composing Joyce. Tom :)

[Joyce S. Greene]

What a wonderful review you have left for me, Tom. Thank you very much for your very nice thoughts. You are a good friend and I love heaing from you.

[rutherford]

Perfect expression. Acknowledging that the true poet bares their true feelings in words.

[Joyce S. Greene]

Thank you, rutherford. I value your opinion highly and am very grateful to you for leaving such encouraging words behind.

[Eddie Phillips]

Melodic in its approach, this poem is very sweet.

[Joyce S. Greene]

Thank you Eddie for leaving behind such a very nice comment. I appreciate your reading and reviewing my work a lot.

[Clara]

You're a hopeless romantic, Joyce -- and I love that.
Beautiful poem.

[Joyce S. Greene]

Thanks, Lola. I appreciate your leaving such nice thoughts behind.

[Pryde Foltz]

Very nice, Joyce. Between the lines, lies the soul.

[Joyce S. Greene]

Thanks, Pryde. Yes, a lot of the meaning of poetry is something the reader has to provide.

[Michael G. Smith]

This is sweet. Is it your husband you writes you poetry? I love to write and recite poetry to my wife. She has a little tell tale laugh that tells me when I've written something really good. I wish more husbands and boyfriends would write poetry for their ladies.

[Joyce S. Greene]

Thanks for your very nice words, Mike. Your wife sounds like a very good listener. It would be nice if more people were poets, but if everyone was a word person, who would build our houses or fix the plumbing? lol

[Michael G. Smith]

Funny you should mention that because my wife is a carpenter and a builder. I bought her a table saw for mothers day and a router for our anniversary. She is one of a kind.

[wordman]

he is a special poet that writes from the soul as the music gently guides his heart
as he treads ground even angels fear to tread
Ron

[Joyce S. Greene]

Thank you, Ron. Sounds a lot like you. Your poetry is always straight from the heart. I appreciate your dropping by to leave me such a nice review.

[wordman]

and you are always welcome I always enjoy reading your poetry
ron

[SyberRose]

I love this Joyce...a lovely piece and congratulations on the contest win too...Rose

[Joyce S. Greene]

What a nice review, Rose, and I really appreciate your congratulations. I will be back to read your poetry as soon as I can. Though I was just on vacation for a week, one day of work has done me in. I'm headed for bed very soon. Five AM comes way too early!

[Jack...]

Poetic touches find the heart,,,as does your perfeclt written work here my friend. This was absolutely beautiful.

[Joyce S. Greene]

What a beautiful review, Jack. I really appreciate your leaving such nice thoughts behind. I will be reading your poetry very soon - just went back to work today after a week off and I'm already exhausted.