his soul lies waiting . . .

a love poem for poets and music lovers

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Graphic Credit: Google Images

Reviews

[Jeannear]

love it simple but detailed!

[Joyce S. Greene]

Thanks, Jeannear, for your very nice thoughts. I will be reading your work soon - too tired tonight.

[wordwarrior]

Ahh and oh my, how soft, gentle and elegantly penned Joyce. Simply stunning

[Joyce S. Greene]

Thank you so much for your very gracious review, word. I always enjoy your nice thoughts. I'll be back to read your work soon. Am too tired tonight even though I've only been back to work for one day after a week off. Guess I really needed a month, or so. LOL Have a great day tomorrow.

[Baby Ricochet]

I'm gently touching someone. That's for sure

[Joyce S. Greene]

Good to hear, BR. lol Will be reading your poetry soon - have to get my beauty (?) rest tonight.read moreGood to hear, BR. lol Will be reading your poetry soon - have to get my beauty (?) rest tonight.
It's hard to go back to work after being on vacation for a week. No time for anything.

[icelandicblue]

Totally tantalizing poem. It is in the in between where the true meaning lies.

[Joyce S. Greene]

Thank you, Anne, for your read and your insightful review. This was my first day back at work after a week off and I'm too tired to review poetry tonight, but I'll be looking forward to reading more of your work very soon. Have a great evening.

[Mark Heathcote]

Short but classy I like its presentation a nice combination.

[Joyce S. Greene]

Thanks, Mark. I love making my poems look nice. It is fun and gratifying. While many frown on it, it makes me happy so why not? I really appreciate your leaving such nice thoughts behind.

[MsJewel]

There is so much emotion in this short, beautiful little gem Joyce. Poetry can capture someone's heart...

Your poem is lovely.

:) Julie

[Joyce S. Greene]

Thanks, Julie, for your very nice comment. I really appreciate your leaving such lovely thoughts behind.

[Ezekiel Silver]

Short but well detailed. Stirring with emotion. Good work.

[Joyce S. Greene]

Thank you, Ezekiel. This is a one of my Japanese short form tanka. I enjoy writing them very much and am delighted you liked this one. Thanks for taking the time to read and leave such nice words behind.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a symphony of feelings...a classical sound of love.

[Joyce S. Greene]

Thanks, Jacob, for your lovely review. I appreciate your kind words very much.

[Frieda P]

Excellent Joyce, who can help but fall in love with the poet through their musings...love this one my friend!

[Joyce S. Greene]

Thank you, Freida. I feel exactly the same thing, and often have. I really appreciate hearing from you and hope your day is a very sunny one!

[Frieda P]

It really is a heady feeling breathing in someone's poetry or music, you said so much with this one, my pleasure, you enjoy your day too!

[Emerald Seas]

This is fabulous, Joyce! We can get so enraptured by another's words, their soul wrapped in stanzas, that we fall head over heels. Lovely read!

[Joyce S. Greene]

Thank you so much for your wonderful review! I feel the same way - I have "fallen in love" with poets just by reading their words. The inner beauty of someone can shine so clearly in their poetry. I hope you have a great day.

[Emerald Seas]

Exactly... And thank you, you too!