Broken

Broken

A Poem by JJ_love

I gave you my heart,

And you took it with care,

But one little slip

And it fell.

Fell

Where it shattered.

Broken

Pieces everywhere.

Some pieces are lost forever,

And others I am trying to put back together.

© 2011 JJ_love


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In time your heart will be pieced together...time heals and pieces broken hearts.
This was real, its something thats relatable to everyone.
i wished i could get a bit more....but maybe its nice short. =]

Posted 13 Years Ago


It's the one's left to put back together that overwhelm.

Nicely done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love it. :] I can relate to it as well

Posted 13 Years Ago


I feel your pain.
Oh, doesn't it drain?
Since I can relate,
I'll give you ninety-eight.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on March 22, 2011
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