The Writer and the Written

The Writer and the Written

A Poem by JLily98
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Two inanimate objects' (could you guess what they are?) love story. Hope you enjoy it!

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Lonely are the nights she lays there desired, but untouched by him 
Staring at the dimly lit ceiling, she longs for the moment he'll let her in 
Only inches away, yet she feels as though they're miles apart 

She feels the distress in his demeanor and looks away in despair
Finally reaching out to her at 1:58 A.M., exchanging looks of desperation
As if they're both drowning in an ocean of their sorrows for not being deserving of each other 

He slowly traces over her body with the words he's been aching to get out 
With every rounded edge of his touch, she knows this is the last time
"Until death do us part", he pierces her skin with his final stroke of endearment

Lonely are the nights she lays there desired, but untouched by him 
With enduring memories plastered for all to read
She'd rather feel the coldness of not having him than the warmth of another

© 2017 JLily98


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You hold such depth when you speak and again you got no credit??? I know people here can be rude but what they don't see is this is a spoken story. People like to be a grammar w***e and tell you oh you did this this and this wrong. Ya know there is a good way and a bad way to tell one. I tell you what I look for I look for a meaning a truth and you have that so smile:)

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You hold such depth when you speak and again you got no credit??? I know people here can be rude but what they don't see is this is a spoken story. People like to be a grammar w***e and tell you oh you did this this and this wrong. Ya know there is a good way and a bad way to tell one. I tell you what I look for I look for a meaning a truth and you have that so smile:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 9, 2017
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JLily98
JLily98

Brooklyn, NY



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