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A Poem by John Morris
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A short poem with no name

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Surrounded by blurred noise,

Sinking swiftly into the abyss,

Down I fell. My stomach lurched

thrown against my body’s wall.

Upside down I saw the world.

Before coming crashing down.

© 2009 John Morris


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Nice description....went there with you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I felt like this just last week.....its amazing how you can block out anything else that is going on around you cuz the task at hand is all consuming...good write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enojoyed this snippet. Very descriptive. I don't particularly like the flow of the last line... It kinda messes with the rhythm... But it was a fun read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Eh! This was very well penned..
short but yet so vivid and deep!
Great work :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

For such a short piece, it's very detailed. The poem was so vividly written that I could almost feel the burst of exhilaration. Very wonderful and an enjoyable read. Great Poem.

Keep Writing. ^___^

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hmmm I know the feeling. Of course now I am intrigued to know what happened... Nice snippet.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What were you doing?...skydiving?....
I agree with the other this is very intense.

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

this is good John, "emotional impact" might have been a good name. I love the expression in getting me to see your world...

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

intense. well done :]

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Deeply moving, down into the darkness of heart and soul. Profound and vivid...

Posted 10 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Cambridgeshire, United Kingdom



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