Soul's silent reflection

For A.

If i was there to put my hand on your chest 

I would have felt my own heart beating

Like looking in the mirror, almost

The reflection of your soul 

Your intimate thoughts and emotions 

I feel the heat of your bare skin

Words unspoken

Just a silent reflection of your soul

Reviews

[Anosom]

I wish I could ever be so close to someone. Very emotional and heart felt. Really talented

[Red Brick Keshner]

So wonderful should we find that one person to whom ours reflects in such striking ways. And wow, poetry that will be, non verbally, and so loud in its silence. Thanks for sharing. Frederick

[Esther:)]

So deep and emotional:)
Thank you for sharing this

[Lisasview]

Hopefully, everyone has had a chance to experience this type of intimacy in their lives..
When one is truly close to someone words are not important..
I enjoyed your poem...
Lisa, now in Spain

[JMaster1]

Thank you dear Lisa

[Lisasview]

You are so very welcome!

[Harmony Lee]

I am really intrigued by the connection here between the physical intimacy as expressed by "the heat of your bare skin" and the emotional intimacy which could readily be just as bare and beautiful. "Words unspoken" -- I would read a million more about this from you although I so appreciate those which you have chosen to write and share with us. Thank you.

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is very sweet. You conveyed a lot of emotion in such few lines.

~Luna

[Danielle Browne]

Beautifully worded! I like your writing style :)

[Deandra Dawn]

This is probably one of my favorites out of everything I have come across tonight. Desire, closeness, a connection. Two people becoming one. Two people feeding off of each other.

[JMaster1]

You are one of my best readers

[Deandra Dawn]

Only because I read between the lines

[JMaster1]

true, you can do it

[Lily]

I love how subtle but powerful this is!

[JMaster1]

Thank you!

[Heather]

I like how succinct this is, so much emotion packed in. I enjoyed this

[JMaster1]

Thank you!!