Soul's silent reflection

Soul's silent reflection

A Poem by JMaster1
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For A.

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If i was there to put my hand on your chest 

I would have felt my own heart beating

Like looking in the mirror, almost


The reflection of your soul 

Your intimate thoughts and emotions 

I feel the heat of your bare skin

Words unspoken


Just a silent reflection of your soul

© 2015 JMaster1


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I am really intrigued by the connection here between the physical intimacy as expressed by "the heat of your bare skin" and the emotional intimacy which could readily be just as bare and beautiful. "Words unspoken" -- I would read a million more about this from you although I so appreciate those which you have chosen to write and share with us. Thank you.

Posted 9 Months Ago


This is very sweet. You conveyed a lot of emotion in such few lines.

~Luna

Posted 4 Years Ago


Beautifully worded! I like your writing style :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


This is probably one of my favorites out of everything I have come across tonight. Desire, closeness, a connection. Two people becoming one. Two people feeding off of each other.

Posted 5 Years Ago


JMaster1

5 Years Ago

You are one of my best readers
Deandra Dawn

5 Years Ago

Only because I read between the lines
JMaster1

5 Years Ago

true, you can do it
I love how subtle but powerful this is!

Posted 5 Years Ago


JMaster1

5 Years Ago

Thank you!
I like how succinct this is, so much emotion packed in. I enjoyed this

Posted 5 Years Ago


JMaster1

5 Years Ago

Thank you!!
I like this. You were able to convey a lot with very little words and that takes skill. Good job and good poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


With so few words, I sense the different emotions you display. It was really good! :D

Posted 5 Years Ago


ohh.. love this one! "silent reflection of your soul"...beautifully worded, beautifully expressed! :-)

Posted 5 Years Ago


This is very interesting. Short but packed with deep feelings and emotions.
I like it ^_^

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JMaster1

5 Years Ago

I knew your eye is special

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