Soul's silent reflection

Soul's silent reflection

A Poem by JMaster1
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For A.

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If i was there to put my hand on your chest 

I would have felt my own heart beating

Like looking in the mirror, almost


The reflection of your soul 

Your intimate thoughts and emotions 

I feel the heat of your bare skin

Words unspoken


Just a silent reflection of your soul

© 2015 JMaster1


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Feelings I know all too well, good job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Swoon...I love it ... beautiful and tender, a sublime piece of poetry...bravo

Posted 8 Years Ago


Your work has a deeply philosophical undertone. I like that; it makes me think. On the one hand I find that to be very confronting, but on the other, it's a refreshing change in the current pace of the written word. Keep publishing, please.

- Katee xo

Posted 8 Years Ago


If i was there to put my hand on your chest
I would have felt my own heart beating

Beautiful!

Id have skipped the Third line coz those lines dont need explanation. Well, me thinks ;)

Lucky A.



Posted 8 Years Ago


Your poem evokes the simple way two souls can become so close, it's almost like one. I like that you paint the picture to be simply appreciated. Thanks for not corrupting the message with how many different ways one can find this blending a bit scary, like losing oneself. Your poem is like a cool sip of water, but not enuf to chug & get bloated on!

Posted 8 Years Ago


JMaster1

8 Years Ago

your reviews are so beautiful
barleygirl

8 Years Ago

How cool is that? Thanks for the great review on my review! *smile*
Short, simple and delicate. Made my soul quiver

Posted 8 Years Ago


JMaster1

8 Years Ago

thank you :)
JMaster1

8 Years Ago

your reviews are so beautiful
Laymeto.rest

8 Years Ago

^.~ thank you
Very relatable and beautifully put! I feel this way with my boyfriend, I consider us one person because he is my best friend and literally the other half of me. He is quiet and reserved and I am loud and obnoxious. He uses the left side of his brain more and I use the right side of my brain more, so together, we make one complete person. I really liked this. Beautiful. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


JMaster1

8 Years Ago

you are welcome and thank you!
Very short and yet it carries a clear message..driving the point all the way home...great poem

Posted 8 Years Ago


Your work is very sensual. I like it. =)

Posted 8 Years Ago


short but amazingly written. The shortness of it adds effect on the piece and makes you feel like you are feeling how the person in this poem is feeling.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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