Intellectual Sex

Intellectual Sex

A Poem by JMaster1



“Intellectual Sex”

 

Watching you sitting on the couch

So close to his Pierced n*****s

You were always attracted to

Intelligent, thought-provoking,

Philosophical men,

Men who could quote Whitman and sip wine

 

Watch you sitting on the couch

As he wet his lip's ring

You miss talking politics and religion

You miss that more than any thought of sex or romance.

With him, it is a fulfillment

Of an intellectual and sexual need.

 

I watch you,

Teasing me in your intellectual way,

I want to make love with you

I don't want your body,

It's too early

Forbidden

 

I want to make love

With your feelings,

With your most intimate

Thoughts and fantasies

Your confusions attract me

The way you use your lack of experience

As your powerful weapon

Make me want you

Make me want to get inside

Your mind

 

Teasing your thoughts

My fingers reach inside

Rubbing your fears

Touching your dirty thoughts

Kissing your memories

Feeling you still want him

So bad

 

Things forbidden always

Become more interesting,

you use a fantasy,

In order to protect yourself

From his temptation,

Your thoughts moan

Purring in a gentle way

I feel your heart whispering

Beckoning

Come to me

Come to make love,

I still want you

© 2016 JMaster1


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FIRST IMPRESSIONS

This is a pleasant stimulation of the erotic senses from the alluring title, captivating image, and purple font. Lavender tends to invoke calmness and serenity. It has been known to arouse men yet calm women. The writer displays attention to detail.

CONTENT AND FORMAT

The Whitman reference caught my eye because I adore Walt Whitman's poetry; it is sensual and you can read it as a stand alone by the sections on any page. As the title suggests, "Intellectual Sex" is seductive to females since we tend to romanticize sex. In contrast, men are visual and physical. Therefore, they court their ladies by means of impressing them with literature. Professors are notorious for this behavior. I think we can all agree that we have had sexual fantasies about our teachers.

I imagined the speaker as a female; an intelligent tease of a woman. She strikes me as a sensual being yet classy. The tone of poem comes off as classical but there are moments of blunt sexual details such as "fingers slip inside." The writer the does not hide behind figurative language but rather enhances it, creating a sensory overload.

PERSONAL CONNECTIONS

I adore erotica personally. It gives me a break from other intense reading material since I am diverse. Frankly, I want to read more erotica now instead of some serious work I was reading. I will certainly be keeping an eye on your writing.

Sincerely,
ria



Posted 7 Years Ago


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Reviews

This is wondetful...i can relate to it in many ways...wow

Posted 8 Years Ago


This really paints a mental picture. I can relate to this. All that comes to mind is the 'darling' about whom nost of my work is written. I enjoyed this.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is gorgeous. You have effortlessly placed words to a feeling which is quite difficult to convey by mere worded thoughts.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautiful poem. I felt hypnotized and entranced just the way a poem should do.

Posted 8 Years Ago


JMaster1

8 Years Ago

I am glad you like it :)
Very descriptive and passionate, the words are delicately chose and well placed. Fantastic work! X

Posted 8 Years Ago


JMaster1

8 Years Ago

wow thank you!!
Nicely done! Very well penned!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow talk about breathy.. . Great write. Amazing visuals, great language

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is really good :)

Posted 8 Years Ago



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