First connection, Few words

First connection, Few words

A Poem by JMaster1
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Sometimes  

It takes just few words to connect  

It takes short messages to feel  

Few words that catch your attention 

Make you smile.  

Suddenly you feel , you breath  

As you know, 

That on the other side of your screen 

Someone feels the same way, 

Experience your words in a special way 

Eager for you to write ,  

More words ,  

Someone special that is almost ,  

Just almost  

Like you 

 

You close your eyes, 

Let your imagination fly  

You share your most beautiful words,  

Bodies touch through the initial connection  

You feel as you are one,  

Bodies and souls 

  

© 2016 JMaster1


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Like crying... If you truly wish to know what I feel, how reading this had made me feel, than this is my answer... Like crying. One of the most beautiful poems that I have perhaps ever read, so utterly breathtaking that by the close I was left momentarily speechless. How did you do it? How could you capture the feeling, that sensation of being touched by the words, the exchange between writer and reader so majestically? In one word this is simply 'perfection'... From the prickled flesh in the photograph to every word across the page. As if I had that moment... Entranced, encased by everything you had spoke of, where I had connected to the writer, to you in such a way that it felt as if I could have written the words myself. This brings back so many fond memories of times when author's have moved mountains within me. Brings back irreplaceable feelings of such love and joy. Sigh... This was nostalgic, JMaster1. Love at first read.:) Don't believe this feeling of the bounding shared between two could have been better written.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JMaster1

6 Years Ago

Now you left me with no words , if my words could touch anyone the way it touched you , it mean that.. read more
Beautiful Intentions

6 Years Ago

Indeed, dear one.:) This should be added to my favorites, and I will correct that mishap now. I was .. read more



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Hi there,
I just went back into your posted work to see if perhaps there might be a poem I have not read of your yet...but alas, I have read all of them...
Not sure if you are reading mine?
Lisa, getting hot in Spain

Posted 5 Months Ago


Good morning,
Your words are so wonderful...connections are without the most important thing in life..At least that is the way I feel...So you poem encompasses...all those feeling of connection. Although you are taking about a sensual connection i one ponders your poem they will see that this also can include all types of connections.
Really enjoyed the read.
Lisa, morning in Spain

Posted 5 Months Ago


This... by far explains the majority of the reason I am on here. Connection through writing. Pouring out your deepest, and most personal thoughts to the world. Almost like sending out a part of yourself on a fishing line out to the universe... hoping someone one day will bite...
Great work.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I feel both happy and sad, longing to some good old days. I love the fact that each and every person who've read this had their own experience with it and thought about a different person and a different experience, could be a happy one or a sad one but it's something we all had. Thank you for giving me the chance to revisit an old good memory!

Posted 3 Years Ago


This ignites so much beauty...it penetrates down to my core! You are amazing. The sentiment you delicately wove leaves the reader longing for that special out of this world connection!

Posted 5 Years Ago


I feel strange reading this, it seems both beautiful and alien, that it can be reached for but is eternally just a little bit too far to grab completely. Adore this so much, it's gorgeous XxXx

Posted 5 Years Ago


Words are powerful. When used correctly they light up our imagination making us soar far away with a dreamy look in our eyes and a smile on our face.



Posted 6 Years Ago


JMaster1

6 Years Ago

True , we are writers , words mean so much , they always move something inside us
I feel a thousand butterflies being zapped by the words of a poet that understands how to use words to convey emotions that so many leave unexplored.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JMaster1

6 Years Ago

only few could feel what you just did
I feel recognition. You have expressed so perfectly the feeling of connection where there are no other physical diversions and you can be raw and honest to a perfect stranger.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JMaster1

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much
I love this! Can't stop reading it.

Posted 6 Years Ago



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