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Sad Little boy

Sad Little boy

A Poem by Joey Nizz

Once i knew a boy who loved to draw
He drew pictures that no one ever saw
He was very artistic late in the night
In his bathroom out of anyone's sight
He kept a secret no one knew
He didn't tell a single soul and his gallery grew
His drawings were different, no paper nor pen
But needed a bandage every now and then
We stood by the river under the stars
He rolled up his sleeves to show me his scars
Felt really embarrassed and looked down at his shoe
Than I rolled up my sleeves and whispered "I draw too"

© 2017 Joey Nizz


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I've used the word 'powerful' in a few reviews already, but I'm tempted to use it again. Once again you have produced a powerful and thought provoking piece. Good job Joey :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Joey Nizz

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much! i really appreciate it :)
This is lovely, and quite emotional.
If it's alright I might correct a few grammar mistakes?

"I" should have a capital letter, "In his bathroom", "his gallery grew", "His drawings were different", "to show me his scars", "looked down at his shoe".

Again, I really enjoyed this poem. There's true sensitivity behind these words. I loved, loved the last two lines. Well done. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Joey Nizz

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much, and thank you for correcting me and its ok always feel free if you noticed anyt.. read more
Abraham George

3 Years Ago

Hes also work there that's why i changed my comment. i was suppose to say the same, but hes is ok th.. read more
Joey Nizz

3 Years Ago

Its ok, and thank you both! :)
its good but can i suggest any corrections?

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Abraham George

3 Years Ago

i am wrong. its good nothing to change
Joey Nizz

3 Years Ago

Alright no problem, but if you ever see any mistakes in any of my writings please make sure to let m.. read more
i can relate to this boy.
i can totally connect to what have you expressed.
great one
huge respect

Posted 3 Years Ago


Joey Nizz

3 Years Ago

Thank you, it is something i also can relate too plus a little bit of outside of the box thinking.read more

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Added on March 4, 2017
Last Updated on April 24, 2017
Tags: Sad, gallery, drawing, pictures, suicide

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Joey Nizz
Joey Nizz

Manama, Reef Island, Bahrain



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