One Step At A Time

Peace isn't as clear

The world we live in is very confused, very disordered

So much negativity

Therefore all spirit

Beliefs shal come together

To merge and create

Peace on earth

Understanding one another

Can achieve the the very harmony

Man different cultures

societies

Souls

Sending a bright light of hope

To all axis

Around the world

People are too wrapped up

In their own minds

To see beyond the end of their very noses

And that is where people

Fail

Peace on earth

Actually takes work, takes effort

Not finger pointing

Blaming

Accusing

No shame

Enough Blame

Just understand self

Within Others

One step at a time.

Reviews

[Andrew Nelson Stewart]

World is always changing as Times They are A- Changing as Bob Dylan sings... Marcus Aurelius said once " Dwell on the beauty of life. watch the stars and imagine yourself running with them." In power over the conscious mind you surrender overwhelming weight we all carry inside our permanent souls trying to feel once again. The latitude of roping some hope against negativity speaks high volumes, loved the line " To all axis
Around the world
People are too wrapped up
In their own minds." Tells me nothing is as encouraging as when virtues are visibly embodied in the people around us . Which is rare in overpopulated world yet there is hope and love along the journey of life. keep writing sincerely your friend in poetry and life

[Joey Nizz]

Dwell on the beauty of life. watch the stars and imagine yourself running with them.

well quoted, and thank you for your honest review, I appreciate it :)

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

One step at a time one day at a time ...I couldn’t agree more...people need to be less selfish and selfless....true words🌹

[Joey Nizz]

Thank you very much :).
And yes i agree with what you've said.

[Lea Sheryn]

We should do all we can to get along with each other. Instead of making a big deal out of our differences, find joy in the things we have in common.

[Joey Nizz]

I agree with you, people should put their differences aside and just get a long, we are meant to live in harmony not in chaos.

Thank you for your review Lea.

[Lea Sheryn]

You're welcome. It's a shame more people don't feel the same way.

[Joey Nizz]

Yeah, but god bless the ones who do.

[Lea Sheryn]

God bless them.

[Chris Shaw]

We focus on what divides us instead of what unites us, and there is much that does. We all need to be more tolerant and kinder to each other. That's the message coming through in your lines. There are a few edits needed here. Mainly typos.

Chris

[Joey Nizz]

Hey Chris, I agree with what you've said and thanks for pointing out the mistakes I shall make some corrections, thank you.

[Nankya Yudaya]

"People are too wrapped up
In their own minds
To see beyond the end of their very noses"

A clear definition of "Every man for himself and God for us all"

Thanks Joe for the poem, hopefully we heed your advice

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome and thank you for your review, I'm glad you like it.