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One Step At A Time

One Step At A Time

A Poem by Joey Nizz

Peace isn't as clear
The world we live in is very confused, very disordered
So much negativity
Therefore all spirit
Beliefs shal come together

To merge and create
Peace on earth
Understanding one another

Can achieve the the very harmony
Man different cultures
societies
Souls
Sending a bright light of hope

To all axis
Around the world
People are too wrapped up
In their own minds
To see beyond the end of their very noses

And that is where people
Fail
Peace on earth
Actually takes work, takes effort
Not finger pointing
Blaming
Accusing

No shame
Enough Blame
Just understand self
Within Others

One step at a time.

© 2019 Joey Nizz


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World is always changing as Times They are A- Changing as Bob Dylan sings... Marcus Aurelius said once " Dwell on the beauty of life. watch the stars and imagine yourself running with them." In power over the conscious mind you surrender overwhelming weight we all carry inside our permanent souls trying to feel once again. The latitude of roping some hope against negativity speaks high volumes, loved the line " To all axis
Around the world
People are too wrapped up
In their own minds." Tells me nothing is as encouraging as when virtues are visibly embodied in the people around us . Which is rare in overpopulated world yet there is hope and love along the journey of life. keep writing sincerely your friend in poetry and life

Posted 9 Months Ago


Joey Nizz

5 Months Ago

Dwell on the beauty of life. watch the stars and imagine yourself running with them.

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One step at a time one day at a time ...I couldn’t agree more...people need to be less selfish and selfless....true words🌹

Posted 1 Year Ago


Joey Nizz

5 Months Ago

Thank you very much :).
And yes i agree with what you've said.
We should do all we can to get along with each other. Instead of making a big deal out of our differences, find joy in the things we have in common.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Lea Sheryn

1 Year Ago

You're welcome. It's a shame more people don't feel the same way.
Joey Nizz

1 Year Ago

Yeah, but god bless the ones who do.
Lea Sheryn

1 Year Ago

God bless them.
We focus on what divides us instead of what unites us, and there is much that does. We all need to be more tolerant and kinder to each other. That's the message coming through in your lines. There are a few edits needed here. Mainly typos.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


Joey Nizz

1 Year Ago

Hey Chris, I agree with what you've said and thanks for pointing out the mistakes I shall make some .. read more
"People are too wrapped up
In their own minds
To see beyond the end of their very noses"

A clear definition of "Every man for himself and God for us all"

Thanks Joe for the poem, hopefully we heed your advice


Posted 1 Year Ago


Joey Nizz

1 Year Ago

Your welcome and thank you for your review, I'm glad you like it.

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Added on November 2, 2019
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Tags: Peace, world, society, hope, negativity, positivity, harmoney, shame, steps

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Joey Nizz
Joey Nizz

Manama, Reef Island, Bahrain



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