Hotel Bathrooms

Hotel Bathrooms

A Poem by JRC Talberg
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A very short poem.

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Hotel bathrooms,
With that smell, that smell of soap.
That smell of fear.
The smell of that damn "new message" notification
After so many days of silence.

© 2012 JRC Talberg


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JRC Talberg
I would like reviews on punctuation and organization, and how it could be arranged to read better, but not on content.

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Ouch, now I see it. Full of emotion even though it's five lines long. Fantastic!
90/100

Posted 7 Years Ago


JRC Talberg

7 Years Ago

Yes, thank you. This is one of the pieces i most wanted to be reviewed, because I wanted to see how .. read more

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JRC Talberg
JRC Talberg

Menomonie, WI



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