Hotel Bathrooms

A very short poem.

Hotel bathrooms,

With that smell, that smell of soap.

That smell of fear.

The smell of that damn "new message" notification

After so many days of silence.

Author's Note

I would like reviews on punctuation and organization, and how it could be arranged to read better, but not on content.

Reviews

[.Lost Soul.]

Ouch, now I see it. Full of emotion even though it's five lines long. Fantastic!
90/100

[JRC Talberg]

Yes, thank you. This is one of the pieces i most wanted to be reviewed, because I wanted to see how people would relate/recognize the meaning.