Diamond- That's life

Diamond- That's life

A Poem by Jack Diamond

pretty self explanitory I would think. Just moved out on my own... not as fun as I thought it would be.


The Water's getting colder


the world is getting real


Welcome to your life son


mum's the word on how you feel


is it all you aksed for?


does it live up to your dream?


open wide and love it son


this bitter taste beneath the cream


the blurry veil is lifting now


it's time to start to live


hollow words and false remorse


is all that we can give


you might be just so special


you might be all you dream


your falce nieve pretences


are tearing at the seams


no one can offer answers


that's because no one knows


believe whatever helps you


and know that your age shows.



© 2010 Jack Diamond

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I liked this, the first 2 stanzas really drew me in, great menaing!

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Jack Diamond
Jack Diamond

McGregor, MN

If you're reading my writing then let me say thanks you. you are now on my good graces thus making you "cool". I am sorry to say but I am really only interested in rythmic poetry, if You write free ve.. more..