Just write

Just write

A Poem by Jackie
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I want to expand. Spend less time with repetitive rhyming and more time expanding my vocabulary. Not to stop rhyming but to play with other sounds more often

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I don't want to rhyme. I don't want 
to waste my time perfecting 
every line. I just want to write 
Give these pages a piece of mind
Expose my heart, display my life
I just want to write. 

I no longer want to struggle
It's become a nuicence 
no longer subtle. It's to much 
work, overwhelming. And It only
hurts

I just want to paint, this is my canvas
But this restraint. These chains, the laws 
I've made. I want to break...

I want to be free. Explore, walk through
That door. Give purpose to those words
Left on the floor. Once disposed to be 
forgotten. But rediscovered and repurposed 
Don't want to look back and be discouraged 
But look forward and pave a new way 
to escape this disorder

Feb 11th, 2019
Cj potts

© 2019 Jackie


Author's Note

Jackie
(Not so much about rhyming as it is about breaking away from same sounds. I shut a lot out simply because I just try sooo unbelievably hard!! Just to rhyme and rhyme and rhyme and rhyme the same words I've and over and over and over and over again... I burn myself out doing it...)

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sounds like free style................

Posted 5 Years Ago


I applaud your resolve to forge your own path. No one should be bound by convention. Still, you might want to do a spell check on the last word of line 2, verse 2.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Jackie

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