My Love

My Love

A Poem by Jacob

My Love, you have made my life worth living, you have brightened my heart on its darkest day, when my soul seemed bleak and the clouds were gray, you assured me everything was okay. And when this life is over, and the race is run, i assure you that our journey will not be done.

© 2008 Jacob


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This is really nice!
Short but so full of emotions... Declaration of love is not always easy but you have conveyed that feel in such a brilliant way through this poem...
Great work and keep writing!


Posted 14 Years Ago


good job jacob. have any more poems that you are going to put on here. i would love to read them.

Posted 14 Years Ago


i like this declaration of love .. a nice piece.. i also hope you post more ..
Chloe
xoxo

Posted 14 Years Ago


bleack = bleak and ok = okay

little typo things lol. but i really liked this. it was simple, and very heartfelt - which is really what counts - that it comes from your soul.

i hope you keep posting some more work. i'd love to read it



Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on March 27, 2008
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Jacob
Jacob

Yukon, OK



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Ive recently discovered this world of "writing" but its something i cherish, ive always loved to read and i enjoy discussing books and poetry with others. more..