A forgotten heart.

A forgotten heart.

A Poem by SuicidePact.

My heart is breaking.
Please tell me why it's aching?
Invisible has been me, 
since I was about three..
Mute is what they call me, 
Insignificant, in the eyes of those who see.
I don't want to be her no longer,
I want to show the world that I am stronger! 
Notice me! Screams my heart!
Notice me! Not through my art.
I want recognition, 
no longer to be hidden.
One step at a time, 
Is hard when you can't see the line.
Where to go from here?
When I can't see the end of this year...

© 2013 SuicidePact.


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Vic
This poem has a very strong feeling to it. I'm not much of a fan in rhyming poetry due to the fact that most lines seem forced, but this piece also seemed semi-freestyle and it made me feel connected to the happenings that may have caused you to write this, a good plus and kept me reading until it's shattering end.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Sam
Good Job! Your details make a flow to your piece of writing! :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Oh the emotions in this fills the lines with each word pinned by you. I love how you write the inner struggle that your heart screams, and the questions where to go when the unknown is unsure of "When I can't see the end of this year..." Enjoyed.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Feelings make for a powerful write, you use your feelings to inspire your work. It is a very painful emotion that you used and that's easy to tell because of how amazing it is. Beautiful write. Good job

Posted 6 Years Ago


You really can do this. It's possible. I know how tough it can be, but you really can do this.
Your piece was beautiful, I only wish you didn't have to go through pain to write it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


beautifully written

Posted 6 Years Ago


You will become stronger. Because you want to be. Keep writing. Thank you for sharing your feelings.

-youoweyoupay

Posted 6 Years Ago


keep writing like this and you will be noticed. if not for your art, then for the soul which lives within you. amongst poets your heart will be recognized and will flourish. well done.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Well articulated. Emotive and honest. A good vent but also a good poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago


you are seen little one and for sure here be yourself give rise to that inner voice and do one random or crazy thing a day that you want to do blessed be

Posted 6 Years Ago



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