S.L.U.T

S.L.U.T

A Poem by SuicidePact.
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a poem about a girl who used to be my best friend, but she decided she'd rather sleep around, then have any real friends, and just left me.

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Does it feel good?

knowing nobody loves you,

knowing you left us all behind,

Knowing that your being used.

 

Do you realise?

That your privacy is online,

That you're labelled 'A good time'

You lost all our respect.

 

Do you notice?

your just an object,

some one to f**k with,

with no added drama,

 

Does your daddy know?

You slept with every boy in town,

Bet your mummy doesn't realise,

that your sleeping around.

 

Do you feel good?

when you look at yourself in the mirror,

you're all alone now.

Is it all becoming clearer?

 

Are you surprised?

That you don't have a disease,

That they aren't coming back for more?

That you turned out to be a f*****g w***e.

© 2012 SuicidePact.


Author's Note

SuicidePact.
#I don't like swearing, usually i avoid it, but this is about something that has hurt me alot, and I just needed to use those words, the wounds haven't healed yet and I feel so strongly about this!!! so im sorry if that word offends you.

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This is just beautiful. The raw emotions that are left here are quite powerful, and you've been able to harness them just enough to create something with them. It is a powerful work that is easily relatable. I feel that too many times we don't give anger enough credit for it's power to be creative, but this proves that wrong. The structure is nice, repeating a question is brilliant. I'd love to know what sparked this gem to be written. Thank you.

Posted 7 Years Ago


6 of 6 people found this review constructive.




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When I first read this, I was a little astounded and disgusted by your language to be completely honest. However, upon second glance at both your poem and your description, I can hear the pain and betrayal in your tone that, I believe, stems from possibly some concern for someone who used to be your best friend. This piece is beautiful because it is astounding. Great job, and I'm so sorry about your friend. C'est la vie, eh? -Anna

Posted 5 Years Ago


I like your powerfull emotions, very good job. (:

Posted 6 Years Ago


You've done great, dear friend. It's hard to watch a friend just go down the wrong path with no regard for anyone else. Sometimes, the stronger words are the only things that expel the emotions. I hope you find a friend who values your relationship--and themselves--more than cheap pleasure. Stay strong!

Posted 6 Years Ago


It didn't hurt...Rather it speaked to me in a very strong way.Although it might be a little too personal but i guess we all can relate to it...Privacy online(social media), just an object and last but not the least....reflection on mirror.
I enjoyed reading it. Hope you have or will get over this friends of yours someday...:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


im gunna b completely truthful - this is the most honest poem I've ever read.
i thought the best put together lines were
Do you notice?
your just an object,
some one to f**k with,
with no added drama,

Does your daddy know?
You slept with every boy in town,
Bet your mummy doesn't realise,
that your sleeping around.

nice job - just don't show your friend this poem
the results might not end up positively
hahha

Posted 6 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

SuicidePact.

6 Years Ago

HAHA no I won't show her! She'd probably embrace it and be flattered -.-
this write may speak to many im sure your heart is shown through this and great writting may offend some but anyone who reads this will see far beyind the word great depth in this my friend.

Keep posting and honestly perfect job on this.
Sorry I havent read your work sooner.

Posted 6 Years Ago


SuicidePact.

6 Years Ago

Thankyou, and that's okay! :)
Raw emotion! Love it! Not offended in the least and I can completely relate to how you're feeling in this piece.

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is very well written. Emotion is raw and straight to the point. I like this. Keep up the good work :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is a really good poem, and im sorry someone left you for that. I hate people like that. I like the questions you asked, this is very powerful and deep. You showed your anger well. Great job

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very powerful use of the loaded words. I could understand your anger and emotion perfectly from the first stanza.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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