What I wrote instead of doing QCS

LIFE is a ball game and you're the next batter.

 

LIFE is a battlefield and my hand's on the trigger.

 

LOVE is the key to happiness

 

LOVE is the reason for war.

 

HOPE is a dream, a reason to keep going.

 

HOPE is an untruth, setting you up for dissapointment.

 

TRUST is something you earn, not soemthing you're given.

 

TRUST is a gamble, where you can lose everything.

 

Reviews

[xSamilynnx]

amazing :) you can feel the emotion in it good job

[Siren]

So true. I love every line. Great job. *hug*

[Bats In The Belfry]

Nice, Thought Provoking!!!

[Dayran]

It sounds like a great recipe. When can we put it to taste? Nice write!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A better use of your time!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

well-penned quotes!

[AK]

Nice poem!

[Sam Severn]

Your poems open my mind n' pierce my heart. N' that last line blew me right the f**k away.....FANTASTIC!! ㋡

[Tamia123]

I agree with everything written here :) Loved it! Very powerful piece! Good Job!

[khalid]

there is lack of trust in tht writinge world today hope it will be back one day, grea