Examination.

Tick tock, tick tock,

Waiting, waiting, patiently waiting.

Writing, writing, i hear pens writing.

Breathing, Coughing, Sneezing.

Listening to the sounds around me.

Sitting in an exam room, wishing I wasn't.

Can't remember the answers, Can't concerntrate.

So distracted by people and all of their noise.

When will this end? When can I leave?

There's no point in staying, when i can't even think,

I just want to leave, I don't want to stay.

As the noises grow louder my heads getting fuller.

I can't control it, the pain is rising.

My heads going to explode.

am i going to make it?

Nobody knows.

Reviews

[Amila Jay]

Very much true! Great poem :)

[Alex Vidmar]

this is great! love it!

[Dayran]

A calm fortitude that is rare among students in an exam but is not persuaded into victory by a lack of relation to the need for exams. Do better next time. Nice write!

[Barbara Walker]

Isn't it wonderful, the way they hold some of the most important tests in your life, in a place where you can't think, because of the noise and distractions? You make a good case for examining and finding a solution for this problem!

[Siren]

YIKES!~ ..heads exploding?? You build up the tension and the pressure in this short space so well. And yet you leave it at a cliff hanger! Wonderful!

[Rasputin]

Reminds me of being in the ER. If you've never been, it's an intensely unpleasant experience. Great job with this one. I could feel the veins throbbing around my skull just reading it.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Thats really amazing, full with imagination and lovely..Everyone has experienced the feeling you described so good!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

whoa...

i kinda felt your tension you portrayed!
:)

[Tamia123]

Everyone underestimates the power repetition can cause but you just reminded everyone. I loved this :) Good Job!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

THe countdown of thoe not held, well done, good read.