(please help me name this.)

(please help me name this.)

A Poem by SuicidePact.

I can’t stop falling, even if I could I wouldn’t.

I just need to keep punishing myself, for all my mistakes.

Nowhere near perfection, I’m no bloody saint.

I just want my own easy escape, my personal getaway.

I can’t look into the mirror without filling my eyes with hateful tears.

It’s like I hate what I see, like i wish I wasn’t me.

You’ve seen the way they look at me, the way the snicker and stare.

If you were me you’d know exactly how that feels, exactly why I can’t deal.

© 2012 SuicidePact.

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Personal Getaway? I name my own work, and I don't really believe in correction or anything like that. Art is what you make of it, not what someone tells you is misspelled or imperfect. Its what you think is perfect that matters, others only comment to correct or judge for self gratification. I guess its like an "I did something today" issue that's self evident. Good luck with naming your work. Cheers, have a good day. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

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I agree with the thought Joshua Randall has for the title being Personal Getaway. I hope you find a title you like for this write soon. Nice write and feeling.

Posted 11 Years Ago

An excellent write .. very nice :))

Posted 11 Years Ago

I agree with joshua x personal getaway fits beautifully x this poem is lovely I really liked it xxx

Posted 11 Years Ago

everything autumn, is my own personal take off of "everything Zen" and i think this poem fits, keep in mind, when i thought up the title "everything autumn, i was 17, it has been a good 15 years i have been trying to say, exactly what you just said.. so take the title, its yours.. and i think it fits very well! (: -s

Posted 11 Years Ago

This poem is called "Everything Autumn" (: i have been trying to write a poem that fits that title, and haven't been able to, You just did! -s

Posted 11 Years Ago

I love this! Simple but beautiful! Everything was neatly expressed here.
Well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago

i likie, as for a name, you have me stumped. i like Joshua's suggestion fits. good luck, :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

Yes, this kind of emotion means you made the first step to be honest in front of yourslef...You look yourslef into the mirror stright away, even you dont see now the real image of you, but the lost one, but you can find the truth with the time...Just don`t be hard with yourself ...
I like much the first verse...

Posted 11 Years Ago

wonderful and short poem i liked it

Posted 11 Years Ago

This is great.
If you can't find a title then just pick random words from the poem, that's what I do. For example: --Falling for all my bloody tears.
--I can't stop punishing the mirror, I wish I wasn't me
--Nowhere near me

Posted 11 Years Ago

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