The love of his life...

I walk into my form classroom, a spring in my step,

As i watch the prettiest girl in world,

She’s sitting by herself,

Right in the middle of the crowd.

But when she spots me in the doorway

Her eyes light up the room.

Yes she is my baby,

The only girl for me.

I watch the faces of envy.

I don’t even care.

This girl, she has chosen me.

I shall never let her go.

Reviews

[AK]

Great poem! I love your style of description-simple but conveys your message. Keep writing!

[CHRIS ANDES]

..a good description

[SuicidePact.]

This was just a silly competition entry ha

[CHRIS ANDES]

nice one
=]

[Aehr]

nice.. very nice and enjoyable

[Alex Crow]

Ah, love. A fickle concept. You did a wonderful job with this poem

[Octob3r Star]

Spoken from your mouth to God's ears. Wonderfully written.

[InfiniteInk]

This reminds me of my first love, my only love being I don't believe it's possible to fall in love more than once.
I like this it seems like it would go great with a romantic story.
Nostalgic write.

[Tabitha t]

so adorable. I love this!

[Fragilebrokendreams]

So sweet and cute! I like how you made this alot.

[Angelic Surrender]

Nice poem :)

[S. Michael Long]

this is a good poem, however, compared to previous writing, its confusing to me, (thats not a bad thing) it may just denote a life transition or something.. Good Read! -s