The Future.

The Future.

A Poem by SuicidePact.

I can see the future, when I close my eyes.

I can hardly wait, to approach its surprise.

I want lots of money,

I want lots of friends.

A great big house, on a nice block of land,

I want lots of children, that’s the life for me.

They‘d sure keep me busy.

I’d write during the night,

And work in the day.

Weekends for my man, when we’d get to play ;)

I can see the future, when I close my eyes.

I can hardly wait, to approach its surprise.

© 2012 SuicidePact.


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And what a future that is indeed. Amazing what things can be seen when closing your eyes, all sorts of dreams. Nice write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very optimistic, I like it. We all have these wonderful dreams of our futures and if we work hard we can achieve these asperations.

Posted 8 Years Ago


well, that's what you call confidence
nice write
=]

Posted 8 Years Ago


very positive and nice flow... your desires of the future... interesting!

Posted 8 Years Ago


i enjoy this poem's optimistic feel :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


Premonitions are always fun

Posted 8 Years Ago


i loved the repeating first and last verses, really I wish everyone feels so clear about the future, Happiness is for sure in simple things!! and children ofcourse :)
great poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


The american dream :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Has a nice innocence of expectation to it. Nice write!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Aghhh the tatalising success and fortune, how we all dream :-)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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