The Future.

I can see the future, when I close my eyes.

I can hardly wait, to approach its surprise.

I want lots of money,

I want lots of friends.

A great big house, on a nice block of land,

I want lots of children, that’s the life for me.

They‘d sure keep me busy.

I’d write during the night,

And work in the day.

Weekends for my man, when we’d get to play ;)

I can see the future, when I close my eyes.

I can hardly wait, to approach its surprise.

Reviews

[emilythestrange]

I like that you've put a emocon in it.I hope your future is as good as this poem!

[Brandon S. Whitten]

May your future be as bright as you. Your writing is growing and will grow as you grow. Excellent read and write!

[Jock Engelman]

i rather like how you have encased the poem with the following lines at the beginning and the end:
"I can see the future, when I close my eyes.
I can hardly wait, to approach its surprise."