Just a thought..

Just a thought..

A Poem by SuicidePact.

I can’t believe we’re together

When we met years ago,

I’d never of guessed.

That one day you’d call me your best.

That we’d find it hard to be apart,

I’d learn to love you,

and trust again.

You’d be my baby,

my one and only man.

© 2012 SuicidePact.


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Glad it's going well ^_^! You've created another poem to touch one's heart :3

Posted 11 Years Ago


Another strong statement about human relationships. You could consider changing the third line to read, 'I'd never have guessed'. Nicely done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Don't we all strife for that kind of simlple ending and start!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a sweet thought :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


Awww I love this poem :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


The heart wants what the heart wants.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Food for thought : )

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice

Posted 11 Years Ago


Awwww... this is too cute :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

When it comes from the heart it's always amazing...this must've come right from your heart. Wonderful job

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 7, 2012
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SuicidePact.
SuicidePact.

Not telling!, SecretVille., Australia



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