Love you forever.

Love you forever.

A Poem by SuicidePact.

Shower me with flowers.

Kiss me in the dark.

Love me forever

and show me who you are.

I’ll be your girl,

I’ll be your world.

Just hand me the key,

The key to your heart,

I’ll treasure it always,

We’ll never be apart.

© 2012 SuicidePact.

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I enjoyed the insights you've shared into the psyche of a love affected person and into the dualities of both love, friendship and what it really means to truly know another, as opposed to having a concept of who you think they are...
I was attracted to this work because of the title, which I used in a very different way, to broach a subject of infatuation and love (on many levels), some of which is perhaps not so far removed from that love which is described in your work.
In French, (known as, 'the language of love'), there are numerous descriptors for the term, 'love'.

Posted 5 Years Ago

Oh I love this. The rhythm, flow and word are lovely. Any person could relate to this.

Posted 9 Years Ago

I really like the last line that fits with the title. Nice write, very sweet. I also really like this part here:
"Just hand me the key,

The key to your heart,

I’ll treasure it always,"

Posted 9 Years Ago

awe.... one of the sweetest pieces I have read

Posted 9 Years Ago

this is so sweet ... :)
i loved it :D

Posted 9 Years Ago

Delicate piece! Your writing is very honest. Nice :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

I like any of your writing really :)
this is great and so sweet.
I could imagine me saying this to a guy... knowing me. Aha :)
Great job indeed.

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

Posted 9 Years Ago

Honestly, I like your older poetry more than your new pieces, this is one of my favorites, its just more elegant to me, and I like it :)

Posted 9 Years Ago

I can practically feel the love!

Posted 9 Years Ago

how cute!

Posted 9 Years Ago

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