What Can I do?

What Can I do?

A Poem by SuicidePact.

What were you thinking?

When you ran away....

Was it something you did?

Were you having a bad day?

How can I help you?

Tell me what to say....

I don’t want to lose you

I want you to stay.

© 2012 SuicidePact.

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I love the layout, the short sentences and words, it drifts like on clouds.

Posted 7 Years Ago

Very nice last two lines to end this poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago

its really nice.. a very interesting way of presenting the poem. well done

Posted 8 Years Ago

This comes at the reader like eight slaps coming from different directions.
Left, right, center, back of the head, across the wrist, center of the leg, left and right cheek. With the a kiss on the forehead, one gentle kiss.

Posted 8 Years Ago

So great ..
well written .. and greatly said ..

Posted 8 Years Ago


Posted 8 Years Ago

i like how you care about this person so much.............

Posted 8 Years Ago

It's everywhere, I love it, it expreses the way out thoughts work, not in lines but just out there! Nicley done.

Posted 8 Years Ago

this piece is perfect expression of flow of mind, conversation between two people, or even thoughts inside me..I love it..thank u!!

Posted 8 Years Ago

New solutions involve new approaches. Nice write!

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on April 7, 2012
Last Updated on April 7, 2012



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