Boy, we've come far

 

I remember when, you said you couldn’t date me...

Said I was too far away,

Never could come out to play...

You said that you’d miss me, late at night

Said you couldn’t be there when I wasn’t alright...

I told you it wouldn’t matter,

That we could get through it.

I guess deep down you secretly knew it.

Cos soon after that we began dating,

We see each other on the odd occasion,

Text during the day,

Phone during the night,

It could of worked much better if we,

lived so much closer

but secretly I think,

distance makes my love for you stronger...

for we treasure our time together

more than most...

Author's Note

this is about my current relationship...

he didn't want to date at first cos of the distance, and distance is harder when you have to rely on parents to drive ya!!

but hey eventually he saw we could make it work...it's been 5 months and still working :D

Reviews

[TKBickel]

Innocently romantic, it makes me smile.

[Aehr]

well... this is really sweet and innocent. distance does keep love stronger but only if you hold on and trust each other. nice poem.

[stars are far]

i dont think that distance make love stronger i think that it only separate people and make relationships worse ..
But your point of view is well written so yeah .. wonderful poem :D
keep that up

[Sarah]

Distance does make love stronger. The poem is amazing well done

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Yes, that`s lovley piece and it`s truth, the distances make sometimes the hearts closer to each other and love stronger than before...
~nia~

[Tabitha t]

Im glad that it is working out for you. i like this read very happy and has a hidden meaning behind it. you can overcome any obsticle as long as you both have love.

[Sibt-e-Hussain]

sell your soul and buy love; who cares distances while living inside you. Bravo for your true real write up & feelings.

[Michael Opoku-Addo]

Well done for making it last so long. Good luck with it and nice poem!

[M.E.Lyle]

Ah, those long distance relationships, they're tough. Never worked too well for me. Good luck with yours.

[Fragilebrokendreams]

Awww, I can definetly relate to this. Its so sweet and romantic! I hope you and your loved one stay together for a long time!