Girls

Fancy nails,

Pony tails,

These are what being a girl entails.

Wedding rings,

Fancy blings

These are things, that make girls sing.

Author's Note

sorry y'all microsoft word had the green line under it, so i just changed it to whatever made that thing go away..sorry for my faults

Reviews

[Dream Weaver]

Brief but very cute...

[Suditi]

Hehehe.. This is a fun poem!
Nice :D

[Clarisse Nanoit]

This is cute. =) It's not going to win awards, but it's amusing, which I feel may be its principle purpose.
KH

[Kaylor Mason]

I can hear rippling bells of laughter and joy in that. Nice :)

[Alex Vidmar]

I honestly have to agree with Lowesy on this one. You should put words in that match what you truly feel. Especially since that's how it seems like the rest of this poem is trying to say just that. Even though it makes sense, it should be a little more... personal. Other than that, this is a great write. I enjoyed it immensely.

[Lowesy]

here is the problem, you said in your own review of this that you just put 'bling' in there because it rhymed.... you shouldn't be doing that, just throwing words in because they rhyme, you shouldn't be putting in words you believe in and want to use. You've also said, you didn't mean to offend anyone, which means you weren't really thinking about it. If this is what you believe, write it and stick by it no matter the reviews you get (unless it's something really bad). Also, just because they didn't approve of the poem doesn't mean they've turned on you, this poem is your opinion and the reviews are their opinions on this piece, not you as a whole. Just thought I'd throw that out there

[Tomislav Petricevic]

I don't understand what's with all that fuss about this poem. It's a good poem, and the meaning may be deeper than it seems on the surface, because it describes that type of girls who care about nothing else than jewelry and stuff, and it can also describe a girl's happiness when a guy cares for her enough to give her something as a sign of that....and also to describe what girls like in general, AMONG other things. This poem never said that these are THE ONLY things.
I'd say you've done a pretty god job, so you just keep it up!

[SuicidePact.]

ITS JUST A POEM!! i wasn't tryna offend anyone saying all girls want is bling...i only put that as it rhymed !! :) :)

[Richy Moon]

... I thought women had more things that pleased them. I don't care for it to be honest with you :(