I have no idea what I was thinking...

One day when the sky is gray.

You’ll pray and pray for the bright sun’s ray.

To enter the sky, where the planes fly high,

Where the birds don’t quite fly,

You’ll watch the clouds pass by

and that will be the day...

Reviews

[CHRIS ANDES]

the words are so cute to read
=]

[Laura Storm]

This piece while good on its own would make a great intro to a story or beginning for a longer poem. This is really good though, deffinatly a hidden meaning and foreshowding of what is yet to come. Wether this will be good or bad is really up to interpitation.

[Sunflower 20]

seems like the beginning to a longer poem or even a story. very intriging.

[Wynn Clara]

Hidden meaning- I hope so, or I might of just gotten more crazy or was already crazier than I thought I was.

[Tabitha t]

i like the hidden meaning behind this. short and sweet and to the point. what else can we ask for folks

[Sibt-e-Hussain]

beautiful flying colors..! Keep on writing for us, Thanks alot Jenn.

[dontwakeme]

Nice word flow....wish it was longer. It's too good to be this short!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

deep piece!

i like the ominous feel

[Krista Weiss]

Simply beautiful :)

[Alex Vidmar]

beautiful