What's going on inside me.

What's going on inside me.

A Poem by SuicidePact.

Don’t try my phone,

I just want to be left alone,

My mind feels so weak,

I don’t wish to speak,

Sadness fills my bones,

My heart, nobody owns.

I’m searching for my purpose,

Feeling forever worthless,

All I can do is cry,

I just really want to die.

© 2012 SuicidePact.

Author's Note

I wrote from the heart, I wrote my current feelings :P

so far it's the only poem i have written this week that i thoought was any good..hope you like it.

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And just when I though I was the only one feeling this. The feeling was there. There's so much pain and hunger for love. I can somehow relate into this. Each line is full of emotions. Keep it up girl :)) Your writings are very strong.

Posted 10 Years Ago

I can relate to this. I love this write, filled with tons of emotion and heart. I love that. Nice author's note as well. Your writing is good, really good, and I enjoy reading it. You put a lot of emotion and heart into little spaces with poems like these. That is a lot of power and heart. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

Man there is so much pain and anguish expressed in the majority of your poetry.
Time out spend some quality time to discover who you are and what you want to obtain from life. Enjoying your poetry but scary at the same time.

Posted 11 Years Ago

nice... feelings well expressed than bottled up. I liked it.

Posted 11 Years Ago

great poem, I think a lot of people can relate to this one because I know I can

Posted 11 Years Ago

This made me feel like im happy inside
It is so nice ... And i liked the sound of this..

Posted 11 Years Ago

Depressing, but it's a good write. You've captured the feeling of depression and lonlines in a bottle and turned them into words. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago

Its as if you took the words right out of my head.

"I’m searching for my purpose,
Feeling forever worthless"
perfect use of words.

wonderful writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago

Death is no good there homie ; ) awesome write

Posted 11 Years Ago

That's one of the realest poems I've read, sometimes people mistake poems about self-destruction as suicidal but I always see them as release, that's ecstasy of your poem, release.
I can relate oftentimes I dream of oblivion.
Genuine write.

Posted 11 Years Ago

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