What's going on inside me.

Don’t try my phone,

I just want to be left alone,

My mind feels so weak,

I don’t wish to speak,

Sadness fills my bones,

My heart, nobody owns.

I’m searching for my purpose,

Feeling forever worthless,

All I can do is cry,

I just really want to die.

Author's Note

I wrote from the heart, I wrote my current feelings :P

so far it's the only poem i have written this week that i thoought was any good..hope you like it.

Reviews

[The Pretender]

Wow. I know very well how this feels, and it's pretty intense. I love your natural use of rhyming.

[Wynn Clara]

Understand your emotions. And that's how a lot of people feel sometimes and others just want to be left alone all the time.

[WinterIce<3]

Things will get better I like how your emotions come out in this writin gand i had a friend like this who thinks like this all the time and me and my best friend help her through it we are all best friends and we help her make it better

[Archia]

Things will get better. I liked how the emotions really did come across in this. Also how it all worked together, the rhyme and everything. It's a really good poem.

[Bell]

Awesome

[Melanie Jane Boicourt S..]

We all go through similar feelings sometimes, even the most optimistic people get down in the dumps. Just be sure to latch onto the positive aspects of your life and hold on for the future. I wrote a similar poem when I was going through depression. It was called, "Leave Me Alone"

Closing out reality, imprisoned within
Crawling in corners to dream and pretend
Shutting out love and shutting out light
Just leave me alone in depression tonight

The darkness comes over me now and again
My hermit behaviors I cannot defend
My positive outlook on life needs a break
Just leave me alone so I won’t have to fake


Although, I have went through those times, I have found that if you change the way you think, you can change the way you feel. Stop the negative dialog in your brain and replace it with positive things. Excercise that every day,,,every moment catching yourself

[*** Hey Jude***]

I like many things about your writing. It comes from a heart that shows beauty even through all of the pain. I can relate to every line in this prose.
To be left alone with sadness, and not being able to see what my purpose is in such a tumultuous world. Wanting to leave this existence, and trying to find my "place" in this world. I have no doubt that you will find these things within a wounded heart that deserves to be loved!
Love is Old,
Love is New,
Love is Me,
Love is YOU **The beatles
Blessed be ~ Jude xo

[Tabitha t]

I liked this but it saddens me that you were feeling this way. You have to much talent to be sad. But then again without sadness....what would this poem have turned out like?

[Otingocni]

I understand how you feel in my own way. But, you never know what could be in the future. We have to go through the ups and downs of life or it wouldn't be an adventure. Just remember, everything has a purpose, including everything that has happened so far, and including you. Curiosity of what could happen in the future, (good or bad), always kept me holding on to life. Ending your life will bring on consequences way beyond what you could imagine. YOU (just your being in this world) effects way more than you could possibly know.

[emilythestrange]

so sad :(.and for the record I think your all your poems are great!Im going to send out read requests for this to people.:)