What's going on inside me.

What's going on inside me.

A Poem by SuicidePact.

Don’t try my phone,

I just want to be left alone,

My mind feels so weak,

I don’t wish to speak,

Sadness fills my bones,

My heart, nobody owns.

I’m searching for my purpose,

Feeling forever worthless,

All I can do is cry,

I just really want to die.

© 2012 SuicidePact.

Author's Note

I wrote from the heart, I wrote my current feelings :P

so far it's the only poem i have written this week that i thoought was any good..hope you like it.

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Aw that's no good that you feel that way. Hopefully you will cheer up soon but I like poems from the heart and this one is pretty cool.

Posted 8 Years Ago

i really like it, its short and to the point.. (:

Posted 8 Years Ago

You really expressed yourself and Im glad its for that moment. I don't want you to really feel like that.

Posted 8 Years Ago

I am so sorry you are filling this way we all do at some point and time in our lives this is deep and well written. I will be praying that God sends his comforter to comfort you and wraps his arms around you letting you know you are not alone. God's blessings to you.

Posted 8 Years Ago

I'm sorry you're feeling this way. Hope you felt better after you wrote this. As usual another great poem. Keep it up girl, you're doing great job. :D

Posted 8 Years Ago

Raw, I have the deep sense that you really don't want to die, you've simply come to realize it'd be so much easier.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Very well written

Posted 8 Years Ago

This expresses your emotions plainly and openly. Many people gp through feeling like this and the best thing they can do for themselves is to do something for someone else in need. You have to get outside of yourself, get away from the inner negativity that always tries to crush our soul. Visit someone who is sick, or do an errand for them. Go to a nursing home and bring some joy to an elderly person who only stares at four walls everyday Play a game with that kid down the street , who everyone picks on. It's amazing how helping others, helps US. Be worthwhile to others and you won't feel worthless.
Favorite line-sadness fills my bones, very descriptive!

Posted 8 Years Ago

I feel all your emotions..this is a very good piece because it came from the HEART!

Posted 8 Years Ago

It's good you can about such a tough time in your life. It's well done, keep writing about your feelings :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

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