Only You <3

Only You <3

A Poem by SuicidePact.

It hurts,

Knowing you’ll never love me the way he does.

It feels no good at all,

with you on the other side of the world,

You’re living your dream.

Living it without me,

while I’m stuck here in this life,

wishing for something more,

I hate that I cannot love him,

hate that I’m stuck on someone who doesn’t want me.

But what’s a girl to do?

When she can’t get over you...

© 2012 SuicidePact.


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A beautifully written poem.
A superb write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very well written ....filled with emotion....Great write my friend......Whisk

Posted 8 Years Ago


I really like this because it is so relatable to people, and it flows really nicely. :) By the way, I love your pact on your profile. Bringing your children to life until they are something more than you'll ever be...that's a really interesting, clever thought.

Posted 8 Years Ago


"You’re living your dream.
Living it without me,
while I’m stuck here in this life,
wishing for something more"

Girl, you just narrated my LIFE right there! This poem totally struck me to the core of my being. It's such a gorgeous, simple way to convey one of the most complex feelings a broken heart can endure. Excellent work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is so cool! this relates to me really well :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


YIKES it sucks to be in a dysfunctional relationship. when u love someone else and ur with someone who doesnt love u the same. sounds its better to break it all off!!!!!!! give time to be alone then meet someone new and fresh. :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


This really conveys a lot in such short words ^_^

Posted 8 Years Ago


If only life was different and you could be with who you want to be with.
But sadly, you can't choose how people feel about you so you've got to move on.
This poem is well written and very relatable.
Well done
Xx

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very powerful words that grip the heart. Love ending as it traces the love you will miss. Nicely done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very well done. I love it.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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