A year ago today.

A year ago today.

A Poem by SuicidePact.

A year ago today,

We had a picnic on the beach,

You told me that you loved me,

Told me that would never change

 

A year ago today,

You kissed me on the hand,

You told me you’d never leave me,

Told me that we’d never change,

 

A year ago today,

We each made a wish,

You told me that I’m yours.

Told me you’d never change.

 

A year ago today,

We made love under the stars,

You told me I was perfect,

Told me I’d never change.

 

A year ago today,

We thought we’d never break up.

We thought we’d never change.

© 2012 SuicidePact.


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Awww. this is quite depressing... because i can relate. Often times, we do think people wouldn't change.. but truthfully people do... whether it be for the better or for the worse.. it's saddening. This poem moves me because i can feel the hurt... and pain through your words. So heartfelt.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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A year ago today,
We thought we’d never break up.
We thought we’d never change.
................Yes very sad. A great write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A sad ending to this poem... Change is a constant certain uncertainty...Both within and without...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That is just emotional...So sad...But anyway, they said, not all things are permanent and if love is real, it will last....Great piece.
:)))

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great poem. very sad

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really understand this poem. It so real. It happens all the time.
I had someone I really cared about and said they would always be there. But know I never see them and when I do I have mixed feelings. Wonderful poem though

~

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem is really sad but extremely good! I loved it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awww. this is quite depressing... because i can relate. Often times, we do think people wouldn't change.. but truthfully people do... whether it be for the better or for the worse.. it's saddening. This poem moves me because i can feel the hurt... and pain through your words. So heartfelt.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderfully written peice.. Some things aren't made to last forever..

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So sad and wonderful :)


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sad but very good!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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