If only

If only you could see the way I do.

If only you could feel the things I do.

If only you could love the way I do

If only you could hear the things I do.

If only you could dream the way I do

If only you could change the things I do

If only you could feel the way I do.

If only you could love the things I do.

Reviews

[SeventhSin]

Wow. This is great :) I like the repetion in this. I kind of read it a second time but in a rappers voice :3 sorry but I couldnt help it :D

[Wondering Mind]

It would be impossible to achieve all these "if only you could", yet the mind and heart never stop wishing for miracles.
Nicely done.

[emmajoy]

I feel as if your words are speaking to your shadow, because that's as near a you anything or anybody can be. One can only crave for another person to stand in your shoes and, if it were to happen, then the day of miracles is not yet over.

[Wendy Seames Garner]

"If only you could change the things I do"

This is the line that stood out for me in this poem. Have you made some bad choices? You are the only once who can change you.

[lei]

i like it. its short yet talks a lot.. yeah 'If only you could feel the way I do.
If only you could love the things I do.'

[AK]

Amazing poem! Your emotions are so strong... Keep writing!

[None]

If only we were all the same... this expresses the differences and pain sometimes of being with people you love who rub against your grain. A great poem about being misunderstood.

[Sarah]

Short, simple and effective. Well done
XD

[emman]

Are you neglected with someone? Nice poem.

[Tsukin Archangel]

short, simple, to the point, utterly powerful, great job