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Goodbyeeee

Goodbyeeee

A Poem by SuicidePact.

You gave me your heart; I promised I’d keep it safe.

Many things happened that summer,

Many things we’ll never forget.

It’s the first time I saw you, the first time we met.

 

It pains me to think, of I time without you

You became my world, and my world became new.

You bit my lower lip; I looked you in the eye.

We laughed until we cried,

 

Held hands along the beach, we danced along the sand.

Watched the fireworks that night,

That night we fell in love, that night we joined together.

I knew back then as I know now,

 

Our love will be forever.

I’m watching you now, you’re as beautiful as ever.

Cries coming from the crowd,

As you’re lowered into the ground,

 

I tremble, I can’t contain the way I feel.

A tear escapes my eye, as I begin a flooded cry,

For today is the day we’re here to say goodbye.

I’ll treasure every memory, forever you’ll live in me.

© 2012 SuicidePact.


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Beautiful...heartfelt .... tender write SP
You touched a lot of hearts today
Great style, form and use of near/slant rhyme (no particular pattern but they worked when you used them).
Excellent poem SP
allen

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oh...very sad. My heartfelt sad. Very good piece. I am always fan of you. My best wishes.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Your words are more than sad, although beautifully written, each line tells its own story, each stanza part of a love shared, ' I tremble, I can’t contain the way I feel. ~ A tear escapes my eye, as I begin a flooded cry, ~ For today is the day we’re here to say goodbye.~ I’ll treasure every memory, forever you’ll live in me.'

You pen sad so very sincerely, it hurts.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Love it, heartfelt, and hurtful. The cruel ways of life tend to make us love to feel hurt in a certain sense. Thank you for the read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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lei
ohh so beautiful and sad and painful seeing him fade away...

Posted 11 Years Ago


I just made this up

Posted 11 Years Ago


Such a tender heartfelt write! As you said,
"I’ll treasure every memory, forever you’ll live in me"
Happy memories last forever, and something that can never been taken!
Beautiful write my Friend! ~ :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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AK
Amazing piece! I feel like crying now, great emotions! Keeo writing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wow. Very moving piece, here. If this happened for real, i give my condolences. It tugged many strings. Very heartfelt piece, nice job!


Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on May 25, 2012
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