TO SOMEONE

TO SOMEONE

A Poem by JENNY
"

Times when we have capability but lacks opportunity.

"
How interesting is the fact of life,
Just watching people living there lives.
Where a life standing in this crowd,
More than usual sitting on ground.

Allowing bird to fly high in sky,
Tying the claws with a string by.
Losing hope one day the bird will die,
Writing the history how humanity died.

Examining the world a life found,
Deep somewhere is a wound .
Never letting it sleep day or night,
It’s not just a dream but it might.

Pretty happy someone resemble its life,
But then pity on that beautiful kite’s life.
Nowadays negativity embracing it well,
Devoid of thoughts it can’t escape as well.

To Someone who feels the same,
You better know time flies quite fast well.
It’s just the beginning when it’s hard,
Coz ending is experienced happy so far.

© 2023 JENNY


Author's Note

JENNY
I hope you’ll enjoy my work

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

"Allowing bird to fly high in sky,
Tying the claws with a string by.
Losing hope one day the bird will die,
Writing the history how humanity died."
Such wonderful and painful lines! This is honestly such a good write, with a brilliant selection of words! Thanks for sharing, Jenny!
Mk.t.g

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JENNY

1 Year Ago

I really appreciate your review.Thank you Mk.t.g
Mk.t.g

1 Year Ago

You're Welcome, Jenny!



Reviews

Beautifully expressed poetry Jenny. Touching to this reader. As long as the bird flies there is hope. Never give up too early, I take from this poem. Thank you for sharing.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JENNY

1 Year Ago

Thank Chris for your precious review. We should always look forward to the amazing surprises of life.. read more
"Allowing bird to fly high in sky,
Tying the claws with a string by.
Losing hope one day the bird will die,
Writing the history how humanity died."
Such wonderful and painful lines! This is honestly such a good write, with a brilliant selection of words! Thanks for sharing, Jenny!
Mk.t.g

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JENNY

1 Year Ago

I really appreciate your review.Thank you Mk.t.g
Mk.t.g

1 Year Ago

You're Welcome, Jenny!
Nicely done, I have been in situations like this but find if you are patient, opportunities will show themselves. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JENNY

1 Year Ago

Yep never lose hope. Thanks Will I really appreciate your review.

Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

95 Views
3 Reviews
Rating
Added on December 18, 2022
Last Updated on April 28, 2023
Tags: Time, opportunity, capability, hope, injustice, Someone

Author

JENNY
JENNY

Rajsamand , Rajasthan , India



About
I’m on midway of being graduated and love to relax by writing daily life incidents in form of poem. Although I’m not a professional but try my best to motivate myself and readers by my wo.. more..

Writing

Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


You There You There

A Poem by Seriana


Lip Lustre Lip Lustre

A Poem by DIVYA


Within Within

A Poem by Ana B.


How it is How it is

A Poem by emmajoy