?¿ SUCCEED ?¿ No Actually its »SUCKCEED«

?¿ SUCCEED ?¿ No Actually its »SUCKCEED«

A Poem by A Jainam Mehta
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There is no word called "SUCKCEED" in English literature. Its imaginery and I've used it to emphasize dark side of success. as we all know journey for success sucks indeed and is full of bitter experi

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Since centuries this word has taken its lead. 
I want success. U want success. Everyone wanna succeed. 
You've never knew, as wrong thoughts you feed. 
You can't Succeed with ease. Actually it means SUCKCEED. 

No matter what u were in history, it sunk. 
Its present that matters, everyone starts as a punk. 
The more u think, The more u lose, 
Complicated ideas make u confused. 
Here n there u'll find everywhere, 
People giving free advice that causes you despair. 
Be fast. Be quick. yourself you decide. 
But you'll find no place in difficulties to hide. 
Know what u want n set goals that u need. 
You can't Succeed with ease. Actually it means SUCKCEED. 

You never meant to do every duty you had to perform. 
Inputs are for something & outputs are unknown. 
The more u are near, The more it fades, 
Your journey to succeed may take decades. 
With each single try, a failure follows. 
The World showers its harshness that silently swallows. 
Be firm. Be strong. yourself u guide. 
But you'll find no friend when failure gives high tides. 
Find ur own defects & make out mistakes u did. 
You can't Succeed with ease. Actually it means SUCKCEED. 

(rap) (Its harder then hardest. Its deeper then deepest. 
if u really want success.
u may need to b cheapest. 
i've suffered & fought.
experience i got.
shout & figure out. 
funda to SUCKCEED i caught.... 
this song is not to bugger about.. 
its right from my soul... 
I wrote this when I analysed... 
path of success is befoul...) 


Demotivaters & haters, never let ur mind b sound. 
Flattering units will pull your legs around. 
The more u resist. The more u fight. 
Intensifying their cruelty, keep your mind in calmly light. 
Cut bonds of emotions as with time they differ. 
Keep off from opposite sex or ur dreams will suffer. 
Be sedate. Be witty. yourself u arise. 
Then no charges in the world can stop u to expertise. 
Then world at ur knees will come to bow. 
Buddies & rivals will start their sweet fake show. 
On your way, backstabbers will pop up as spikes. 
Adding to ur unrest, as they drive rumour bikes. 
"Jainam is not proper...he can't do that. 
Jainam is unfit... he is too late. 
So Jainam can't succeed & blah..blah..blah.." 
I did'nt heard what they said then started success era. 
You need to do the same, hearing them, dont feel lame. 
Pray to God u believe in, to win Success game;
Mahavir, Sri Ram, Allah, Jesus or be it Wahe Guru. 
Get their divine blessings & to yourself b true. 
Coz u r the only one who will pay for own deed. 
You can't Succeed with ease. Actually it means SUCKCEED. 

Millions of people, give up every day. 
They don't face challenges and simply run away. 
If you are indifferent like me, never try to be rid. 
Your efforts to SUCKCEED will make u SUCCEED. 


By~ A Jainam Mehta}>JM

© 2012 A Jainam Mehta


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amazing, love it , a very inspirational poem! Thank-you for sharing your insightfully delightfull poem, a treat to read indeed.

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A Jainam Mehta
A Jainam Mehta

Surat, Gujarat, India



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By proffesion I'm a Civil Engineer. Its my hobby to write poems on the genres like philosophy, emotional, comedy, satire with humour, current affairs, Self, etc. >I love to Laugh. >I Don't like pr.. more..

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