$* Angel of God *$

Its all (yet very little) about mother. These few lines are dedicated to all Mothers.

“Beta its morning, its Six, go get ready for your school.”

“I told that hundred times, why don’t you understand you fool.”

“This is my last warning to you, not to quarrel like wild.”

“Dear, I knew it, that you will succeed, bless you my child.”

 “I’ve made your favorite dish for lunch, can you guess what?”

“Now you’re elder & wise, remember the things, which I taught.”

Never cared for yourself and kept worrying for me. Why?

Since I took my first breath, you’re with me whenever I cry.

All this Care n love, with which I’m always blessed.

O Mother, are you an angel of God? I’m amazed!

 

For my all pranks and mistakes, you are like angry cop.

But, when I’m covered by darkness, you’re like shine of hope.

How did you find the energy, to do all the things you did.

To be teacher, nurse and counselor, when I was a kid.

How did you do it all, Mom, Be a chauffeur, cook and friend.

Yet find time to be a playmate, I just can’t comprehend.

You're a source of comfort and my cushion, saving me when I fall.

In times of trouble, you support me even before I call.

All this Care n love, with which I’m always blessed.

O Mother, are you an angel of God? I’m amazed!

 

Not for your own rights, but for me, you always fought.

Your nourishment of wisdom made me, what I’m today, thanks a lot.

Though you scare me with big eyes n stretched eyebrows, when you scold,

I love you for the shelter you gave, till I became brave n bold.

Even today, when I get tired of messed up things n worries,

I recall my childhood and mummer your poems n Lorries.

I was child then a teen then a man, “Wise man”.

In every stage, your backhand was there to design n plan.

Often a thought shocks like a thunder, when it comes to my mind,

What would I do without you? God please never be such unkind.

All those Care n love, with which I’m always blessed.

Yes mother, you are an angel of God. Again I’m amazed!

                                            }> A Jainam Mehta

Reviews

[Tweezy]

This is interesting. in the middle of reading it. i thought, it was about an angel. then towards the end, i realised that the angel in question was your mother.
this is great poem. the two lines i love the best are...

"You're a source of comfort and my cushion, saving me when I fall" AND

'In every stage, your backhand was there to design n plan'

great work.. well done Jainam

[Brandon Mathis]

i dont know if your mother is alive or not but she must be very proud of this poem you wrote very good, keep them coming i like reading poems like this, thanx!!

[Talismanic]

...'you are like angry cop' haha so much laughter in this and so touching...

[Laura Maidah]

I lost count of the comma splices. Wow.