Utopia

You can not crush us

We will continue to struggle

Until we have independence

As defined by us

We are the future

We won't be forever

But we're next at bat

And we choose the game

We don't pick War

We disdain your Famine

We'll stop your Disease

Even Death will be weakened

When we're done

Your disasters will be dispersed

We will give our children not

Your Hell

But our

Utopia

Reviews

[Daniel Affsprung]

I like it a lot, i always enjoy poetry and writing concerning new generations and what the future holds.

[Rayne Stanton]

I like the way it captures the emotion! nice write

[Lily Mae]

I love the raw intensity and then the use of Utopia... I love the balance...as it should be :) great write..xx

[Coyote Poetry]

My favorite word Utopia. When I was a kid in 1970. The year 2000. We would be working 32 hours a week. Music and literature would be the goal of all. No more wars and hate support to be gone. My generation did a s****y job. I hope you do better. I have seen the world become worst. How to fix? I believe would be easy. USA spend more money on war then the next 40 countries combine. We spend 1.2 trillion on war. 1.2 trillion could get free education for all. Insure all people have food and a bed. I pray for Utopia for you and my children/grand children. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Althelia Marie Caine]

Very nice