Stories

Stories

A Poem by Jake Staffeld

Run
Release
What is within

Shadow in shadows
A general emotion
Not rage nor joy
Something unnamed

Invented
Imagined
Created

Dark on black
Deepest starless night
Feelings abnormal
And perfectly standard

Trapped
Stranded
Printed

Empty valleys
Between snowy peaks
Tell a story
How they felt
What they saw

Words
Ideas
Stories

© 2011 Jake Staffeld


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This was a perfect description of short stories....the piece felt like it described itself with your phrasing...it just floated lazily aroud in my mind and at the end of it all i found like it was a great read...highly descriptive though subtly done...my preferred type of write! :#

~M.Babu~

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I rather like the format and language... good write

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is weird but I felt like I was in the mountains and the ever changing landscapes and changes within seasons.. so much like our lives.. excellent write..xx

Posted 11 Years Ago


This was a perfect description of short stories....the piece felt like it described itself with your phrasing...it just floated lazily aroud in my mind and at the end of it all i found like it was a great read...highly descriptive though subtly done...my preferred type of write! :#

~M.Babu~

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the way you used the language. Made the flow of the poem easy to read and got your ideas across. Your words are true. We need words, ideas and story. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Jake Staffeld
Jake Staffeld

Bend, OR



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I'm in college, whoooooo. I like all kinds of rock, and songwriting. That's how I got into Poems in the first place. Some of these will actually be songs of mine I've modified. more..

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