Chaotic Cadence

Chaotic Cadence

A Poem by James

Light that shone through the trees
in rays that scorched the midnight ground
and brightened a path for me to see
as I searched my way through a darkened wood.

I found on my nightly walk, through fallen leaves 
and the damp air of an early fall 
the quiet reflection lost in the busy cadence 
of a chaotic life.

The sounds in the darkness
drowned out the noise from the highway 
that endless rush of mass with no feeling
no emotion
no decency

© 2018 James


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Life can seem full ofchaos and zombification and indifferences of the masses, but at leat we have the silent paths to walk that helps us make sense of the senseless.
Cadence is the perfect word to describe the feeling your words convey so well.
One thing though, did you mean shone instead of shown in the first line? Otherwise, perfect :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


James

5 Years Ago

I did, thanks..my proof reader must be broken
decency is hiding somewhere in a Wood where nobody goes anymore.
and it is really sad...

love it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

James

5 Years Ago

It is sad. Life is too crazy sometimes...I'm glad you enjoyed this.
I totally understand this one! Wow. You have carved out in words that feeling I felt at night many times.
This is so good.


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Papaya

5 Years Ago

does that follow the pattern of:
A
A
B
B
A
James

5 Years Ago

Yep,
Stanly Fenny was roasting a weenie
When he saw her in a bikini
He asked ".. read more
Papaya

5 Years Ago

lol!!!!!!!!

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Added on November 14, 2018
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The Beach, NC



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